Caught' Ya Corrections and GiVeWaY Reminders....

Dear Reader,
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     Now, for those of you who read my previous post, I had given you a 6th-grade grammar lesson of sorts and said I would give you the corrections in my next post...and I said I thought there were 13 corrections.  This is the uncorrected version:

horribly hard middle school did not look much different from there elementary school which was nearby in their town of tedious alabama.  a big one-story brick building set nestled among large trees and a verdant lawn and a small city of white portables dotted the field behind the school like white lily pads in a green pond

And this is the corrected version:

     Horribly Hard Middle School did not look much different from their elementary school which was nearby in their town of Tedious, Alabama.  A big, one-story brick building sat nestled among large trees and a verdant lawn, and a small city of white portables dotted the field behind the school like white lily pads in a green pond.

The corrections are in red, and there are thirteen. 

*Note* Did you find the simile?  Hint:  A simile compares 2 unlike objects using the words like or as.

Have a lovely day!

-Mug

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